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Editing Packages

Open Book

Full Developmental Edit

This plan includes a detailed manuscript analysis with an eye on the big-picture, two revisions, constructive video meetings, and comprehensive editorial letter, to help you bring your story to life.

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Manuscript
Evaluation

This plan offers a broader analysis of your manuscript to identify big areas of weakness and improvement. It includes a shorter editorial letter and only one revision.

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Outline
Critique

This plan offers a detailed review of your outline with a focus on structure, character development, themes, and reader engagement. It includes a short editorial letter, one round of revisions, and a video call.

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5K Pass

This plan offers an in-depth analysis of your first 5,000 words, ensuring your opening is captivating and effective. It includes in-line feedback, a short editorial letter, one round of revisions, and a video consultation.

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What Authors Say

"Whether you are looking to self publish or want to polish your book before querying - Alessia is the editor for you!"
- Hazel McBride, author of the "Bonded to Beasts" series
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Full Developmental Edit

Pricing starts at £0,02 per word* 

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You have finished your novel, it has gone through one or two rounds of self-edits, maybe a couple of beta readers have had a cheeky look at your novel, and you feel GREAT about it. You are ready to give your book baby to someone who has spent years over-analysing literary works and is now a professional editor. If that is you, this is the plan you need!

 

Elements I will focus on until I start seeing double:

  • Structure: The pacing and progression of the manuscript, and the narrative structure.

  • Character Arcs and Plot: The level of engagement of the plot and its logical progression, ensure characters are well-rounded with clear motivations, consistent behaviour, and compelling arcs.

  • Narrative Voice and Dialogue:  To create an authentic and engaging reading experience.

  • Setting, Theme, and Atmosphere: Ensure elements such as setting and atmosphere are immersive to elevate the impact of your novel.

  • Reader Engagement and Genre Alignment: Maximize reader engagement by aligning your novel with genre expectations for broad market appeal.

  • Consistency and Continuity: Smooth out any bumps, ensuring a seamless reading experience.

  • Language and Style: Elevate your prose with a focus on refining language and style

  • Target Audience Optimization: Tailor your novel to resonate with your target audience, enhancing connection and relatability.

 

What's in it for you:

  • Two Rounds of Revisions and Two Video Meetings

  • Extensive 20+ Page Editorial Letter: Outlining strengths, areas for improvement, and actionable suggestions.

  • Feedback and Guidance: I do not shy away from giving detailed in-line feedback (you will see a lot of "YEEESSSS!! OMG!! This is soooo good").

  • Collaborative Relationship: As your editor, I will be working on your manuscript as best as I can, but the story really lives in your head so it is important to also foster a positive and supportive relationship with you.

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*Payment plan available upon request.

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Manuscript Evaluation

Pricing starts at £0,01 per word* 

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This plan focuses on providing you a broad evaluation of your manuscript. Maybe you have finished your first draft and are not fully ready for a developmental edit but you would still like someone else's opinion on it. If this is you, this plan is what you need!

 

Elements I will broadly focus on are the following:

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  • Structural Analysis: Evaluate overall structure and narrative flow.

  • Character and Plot Assessment: Analyze character development and plot coherence.

  • Reader Engagement and Market Considerations: Assess reader engagement and align with genre conventions.

  • Consistency and Continuity: Check for consistency in details and narrative flow.

  • Language and Style Feedback: Provide suggestions for prose improvement.

  • Target Audience Analysis: Evaluate alignment with the intended audience.

 

What's in it for you:

  • A short editorial letter (10 pages max.) and in-line comments

  • A 1 hour video meeting where I provide additional insights, ensuring your complete satisfaction with the transformative journey your manuscript undergoes. 

  • One round of revisions

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*Payment plan available upon request.

Outline Critique
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Outline Critique

Pricing starts at £0,005 per word* 

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Whether you're building your plot from the ground up or giving it a fine-tuning, having a solid outline is the secret to a seamless, page-turning story. With this service, I’ll help you refine your outline by focusing on:

  • Structure: Nailing down the pacing, narrative flow, and plot progression so your story keeps readers hooked.

  • Character Arcs: Making sure your characters grow in a way that's both compelling and believable.

  • Themes & Genre Alignment: Ensuring your story hits all the right genre notes and captures the themes you're aiming for.

  • Reader Engagement: Assessing how well your outline grabs attention and keeps your audience invested.

 

What's in it for you:

  • A short editorial letter (up to 5 pages) highlighting your strengths, pointing out areas to improve, and offering actionable suggestions.

  • A 30-minute video call to dive deeper into the feedback and discuss any questions or ideas.

 

This service is perfect for writers at any stage who want to solidify their plot and characters before diving into the drafting process. Let’s turn your outline into the roadmap for an unforgettable story!

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5k Pass
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5k Pass

Pricing starts at £0,008 per word* 

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The opening of your manuscript is everything—it’s where readers decide if they’re hooked or not. With the 5K Pass, I’ll dive into the first 5,000 words of your story and help you set the right tone, grab attention, and lay a solid foundation for the rest of your book. Here’s what I’ll focus on:

  • Opening Hook & Structure: Ensure your story starts strong, with smooth pacing and a clear narrative direction.

  • Character Introductions: Make sure your protagonists and key characters leap off the page from the get-go.

  • World-Building & Setting: See if your world is vivid and immersive while avoiding info-dumps.

  • Prose & Style: Sharpen your writing for clarity, emotional impact, and engagement with detailed line edits.

 

What's in it for you:

  • Comprehensive in-line feedback throughout your first 5,000 words.

  • A short editorial letter (3-5 pages) with insights on what’s working, what needs adjustment, and key recommendations.

  • One round of revisions, plus a 30-minute video call to discuss feedback in detail.

 

This service is ideal for querying writers seeking feedback, new authors looking to refine their skills, and self-publishing writers determining their editing requirements before publication. It’s perfect for anyone wanting to strengthen their manuscript’s opening and make sure it hooks readers from page one!

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